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JoshuaElswick |
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Blackwolf7337 |
1. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 11:12 AM EST
Lucas wrote this many, many years ago.The dearest angel, The sweet young bird. Your wings: unseen, Your voice: always heard. His wings are black, Yours are unknown. He was sent to kill, But he took you home. Years of anger, Years of strife. Led you to find, Another life. My dearest angel, My sweet young bird. Your wings: unseen, Your voice: always heard. You left for love, And my darling, it's here. Here in my arms, You felt no fear. But I, too, meant to hurt, That, I could not do. I abandoned my cause, It was all for you. His dearest angel, His sweet young bird. Your wings: unseen, Your voice: always heard. My heart is yours, But your heart is his. When all we had left, Was but a kiss. He took you from me, You gave him your love. Though, you're still my raven, And I'm still your dove. Our dearest angel, Our sweet young bird. Your wings: unseen, Your voice: always heard. 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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JoshuaElswick |
2. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 5:32 PM EST
....................... expression, should be kept to myself at times.................................1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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TheTruth2525 |
3. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 5:40 PM EST
Roses are red,Violets are blue. I can't write peotry, Because I'm untalented, Unlike you. Skill, at its finest. Lol. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Blackwolf7337 |
4. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 5:42 PM EST
"....................... expression, should be kept to myself at times.................................Is it really that bad? Lucky I didn't write it. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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TheTruth2525 |
5. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 5:55 PM EST
"Is it really that bad?No, it wasn't. And my poem being right below it, should make it look ten times better than it already is. .____. Fail. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Blackwolf7337 |
6. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 6:02 PM EST
"No, it wasn't. And my poem being right below it, should make it look ten times better than it already is. .____. Fail."It was written about a hundred years ago. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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JoshuaElswick |
7. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 6:04 PM EST
"Is it really that bad?I meant mine, I shouldn't express myself so much.... the only things that I have been known for are my weird ideas/ words/phrases, my rediculos talent to annoy people, not shutting up, and my daydreaming/sleeping. so I try not to try so that it isn't harder and to make it easier to fail. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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TheTruth2525 |
8. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 6:07 PM EST
"It was written about a hundred years ago."Still a very well written poem! I can't create anything with sentimental roots without it sounding completely corny. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Blackwolf7337 |
9. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 6:23 PM EST
"Still a very well written poem! I can't create anything with sentimental roots without it sounding completely corny. "Well, the writer, Lucas has been very troubled over the years, so it's easier to put expression into words. He's 763, and I'm sure that doesn't hinder his poetry abilities. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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TheTruth2525 |
10. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 6:44 PM EST
"Well, the writer, Lucas has been very troubled over the years, so it's easier to put expression into words. He's 763, and I'm sure that doesn't hinder his poetry abilities."I don't know if I am the only one that caught this in the poem.. But it seems like his trouble was from a woman.. As in the words "My", "His", and "Our" sweet young bird. Correct me if I'm wrong.. It's just that because since I'm a psychic I've been getting rather good at connecting dots to random things.. And finding secret/hidden meanings behind things such as poems, song, and even politial cartoons.. Lol. 3 out of 3 found this valuable. Do you? |
Z.G.Taylor |
11. RE: poetry
Jan 20 2013, 10:41 PM EST
"I meant mine, I shouldn't express myself so much.... the only things that I have been known for are my weird ideas/ words/phrases, my rediculos talent to annoy people, not shutting up, and my daydreaming/sleeping. so I try not to try so that it isn't harder and to make it easier to fail."being able to piss of people till there blue in the face is a gift bro... well i sure as hell hope it is or im screwed 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Mythology_Master |
12. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 7:48 AM EST
"love is a chrystal dove, fragile yet agile, avoiding all but the truest of heart.Oooh! Oooh! I have a poem. Mrs. Little Puffet Sat on her tuffet Eating her Milky Way :) 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Blackwolf7337 |
13. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 10:20 AM EST
| Post edited: Jan 21 2013, 10:49 AM EST
"I don't know if I am the only one that caught this in the poem.. But it seems like his trouble was from a woman.. As in the words "My", "His", and "Our" sweet young bird.It is about a woman. In the beginning, she is being hunted. Her killer sees her, but can't find it in his heart to kill her. He fell in love with her. After a while, though, she left him. When she left him, she found the writer of the poem. He had found her intentionally, as an act of revenge on the first man. He also fell in love with her by accident, and couldn't bare to hurt her either. On their wedding day, as they were about to kiss, ("when all we had left, was but a kiss.") the first man returned and stole the woman back for himself. For some reason, she still returned his affection, and slowly fell back into love with the first man. Sadly, the writer still loves her with all of his heart. 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Ashkinuna |
14. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 10:30 AM EST
Here is a forced poem that I had to write in under an hour:Gives hope love and grace Oh Agonizing Beauty Never attainable Beauty that never falters, hope that never fades, love that never forgets, and grace that never fails, are what dreams boast. Their endless beauties turn endless pain when you depart. Oh dreams why do you agonize those you entice? Giving them hope, love, and grace that ceases as they awaken. All while denying them access back into the same wonders. Never the same, always shifting, always changing, always harming those who want your embrace. What treachery is this, filing those minds with thoughts so pure, only to take them away never to return. You never repent, never relent, you never learn. It is as if your warmth is just a disguise for an underlining coldness. Shunning your followers out into the cold realities of the world, after showing them your warm embrace. How can you ever be forgiven, yet you always are, everyone always accept your grace, while knowing it never lasts. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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JoshuaElswick |
15. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 3:27 PM EST
"Here is a forced poem that I had to write in under an hour:2nd place, Myth_Master you get first, just joking(no offense Myth), there is no awards. Truth, I do that too... if it only belongs to phycics then I need to learn how to levitate the cows... very funny reactions from people who see physcic cowboy mind herding his cows:) no offense but that is a normal thing for 3 out of 5 people(or 1 out of 5 when you enter Jersey), it is good though that you can do so. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Blackwolf7337 |
16. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 3:34 PM EST
"2nd place, Myth_Master you get first, just joking(no offense Myth), there is no awards.I think you mean 0.001 out of 5 in New Jersey. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Mythology_Master |
17. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 3:42 PM EST
"2nd place, Myth_Master you get first, just joking(no offense Myth), there is no awards.Yay! First place! Wait? No awards? All that time I spent making that poem and no awards? :'( Why, Josh? Why?!?!? 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Blackwolf7337 |
18. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 4:12 PM EST
"Yay! First place!Hey, it took Lucas 200 years to work out that poem! If anyone should have first place... Sorry, I like ranting about stuff. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Ashkinuna |
19. RE: poetry
Jan 21 2013, 4:18 PM EST
"Hey, it took Lucas 200 years to work out that poem! If anyone should have first place...Hmm, I know there is the phrase "you can't rush art", but isn't that still a long time? 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |