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Jan 26 2013, 1:03 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 26 2013, 1:03 PM EST
“Come run with the wind,”
Said the elf to the small dwarf.
“No” replied the dwarf.
“Why not?” ask the elf, “It’s nice”.
“It’s still a no” said the dwarf.
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JoshuaElswick
JoshuaElswick
1. RE: poem
Feb 2 2013, 3:06 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 2 2013, 3:06 PM EST
"“Come run with the wind,”
Said the elf to the small dwarf.
“No” replied the dwarf.
“Why not?” ask the elf, “It’s nice”.
“It’s still a no” said the dwarf.
"
not poetry, more of a silly little rhyme
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TheTruth2525
2. RE: poem
Feb 2 2013, 7:29 PM EST | Post edited: Feb 2 2013, 7:29 PM EST
"not poetry, more of a silly little rhyme"
Okay, seriously?
You can go ahead and try to start 5th grade drama with me, because of my beliefs (It was intentionally a joke).... and then call me a hypocrite for it... But who are you to say what is poetry, and what is not?
Last time I checked.. Poetry can rhyme.

Your responses are extremely irritating.
You act like you have all the answers... But you don't.

Don't act like whatever you say is entirely correct, because it's not.

*Poetry doesn't always have to have meaning. Do you know how I know that? Because I've read every single Dr. Seuss book there is. Does any of it have deep heart-filled emotion? Nope.

Red fish,
Blue fish,
One fish,
Two fish.
(:
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JoshuaElswick
JoshuaElswick
3. RE: poem
Feb 3 2013, 9:40 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 3 2013, 9:40 AM EST
"Okay, seriously?
You can go ahead and try to start 5th grade drama with me, because of my beliefs (It was intentionally a joke).... and then call me a hypocrite for it... But who are you to say what is poetry, and what is not?
Last time I checked.. Poetry can rhyme.

Your responses are extremely irritating.
You act like you have all the answers... But you don't.

Don't act like whatever you say is entirely correct, because it's not.

*Poetry doesn't always have to have meaning. Do you know how I know that? Because I've read every single Dr. Seuss book there is. Does any of it have deep heart-filled emotion? Nope.

Red fish,
Blue fish,
One fish,
Two fish.
(: "
.... if you wish to piss other's off nice jon, I don't believe I'm always right; I stand up for what I beleive, there is a difference.... if someone shows that I am wrong then I admit it and I admiteadly hate being wrong but unless it costs lives I'm willing to live and let live, if it does cost lives I take responsibility for my actions and accept my fate....

don't assume you know me, I have suprised a lot of people... and many more than that hate me, so thanks for making my lists of reluctactant enemies longer; I never like to argue and it bothers me that you like think I'm an asswhole, so I will stop talking to you... seeya, hope you live long and can make admends with those you hurnt before they leave you.
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TheTruth2525
4. RE: poem
Feb 3 2013, 9:52 AM EST | Post edited: Feb 3 2013, 9:52 AM EST
".... if you wish to piss other's off nice jon, I don't believe I'm always right; I stand up for what I beleive, there is a difference.... if someone shows that I am wrong then I admit it and I admiteadly hate being wrong but unless it costs lives I'm willing to live and let live, if it does cost lives I take responsibility for my actions and accept my fate....

don't assume you know me, I have suprised a lot of people... and many more than that hate me, so thanks for making my lists of reluctactant enemies longer; I never like to argue and it bothers me that you like think I'm an asswhole, so I will stop talking to you... seeya, hope you live long and can make admends with those you hurnt before they leave you."
Those I've hurt? You've gone completely bonkers.
I never said you were an "asswhole".
I don't think of you as an enemy (I've never stated that either), because you're right, I don't know you. Never once did I claim to have known you for any period of time.

And you say there is a difference in what I say, than beliefs....
You also said you admit being wrong in situations where you actually would be wrong.. Well, I'm waiting..?
Poetry can rhyme.. It's as simple as that.

Sure, if you insult me and my beliefs, I'll probably just brush it off of my shoulders.. But if you try and insult people that just wanted to share something that might've taken them a long time to write.. You've crossed a line!

If you didn't like the poem, you could've just clicked out of the thread, instead of insulting someone else's work!
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